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My body stands frozen, now
My eyes can only blankly gaze
Forced to roam the halls
As a pale shadow of my former self.

To think I've
Done this to myself
Seems criminal.

But,
My heart will never
Hurt again...
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RICHIGO1211 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
the is infinite and we have to imaginate an end, that's awesome
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KeyFrost Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
u v u
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AnyaRomanova Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It really just reminds me of death, and now there is nothing left but the persons spirit, that is "forced to roam the halls".
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KeyFrost Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
She froze to death there.
Her blood, red crystals,
And her body, gleaming icy stones.
Only to be chained to the crypt
To relive her guilt.
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AnyaRomanova Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I thought so...
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gamealchemist214 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014
Goddammit Frost. You're the only one who can make my serious side come out.

The speaker of this poem is just so calm about the whole thing, how far gone they are, how overcome with emotion, that their mind and heart begin to freeze over, yet they are unable to ecsape. 

So good >V<
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KeyFrost Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
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thank
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gamealchemist214 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014
Poor ghosty guilty magician person... Really Sad 
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gamealchemist214 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014
And dammit, in the time it took me to write that comment you already said that! XD
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typhoonlagun Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awesome<3
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KeyFrost Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thankies <3
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typhoonlagun Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
np~
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bunigator Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this one would definitely be the ending
very deep and it really makes you think
"well dang what did this person do??"
I really like the 2 parts
it's very interesting because of this work
my mind is starting to make a story, just off of this work

your poems are very powerful Frosty, and that fact is absolutely marvelous
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KeyFrost Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
A woman or man, overtaken by his or her guilt
decides to exile himself/herself, and refuses to eat, sleep, or other necessary actions.
Slowly they wither away in the cold dungeon-like crypt, and soon, their heart slows,
and their blood freezes, making their body freeze as well.
When they died, their ghost then roams the halls for all eternity, trying to overcome the guilt.
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bunigator Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
o0o freakin' DANG

that's some deep stuff
will they ever have peace???
what if this turned into a trilogy????
could that happen???

but, what caused the guilt?
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KeyFrost Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Only the guilty knows the crime, dear.

a magician never reveals his secrets hh
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bunigator Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
dang

magicians do wear robes
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KeyFrost Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
so do women
and children
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bunigator Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist

do they??
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KeyFrost Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
yes
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